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Today is Sunny.I want to visit to my friend,Tom.When I getting his home,he is doing his homework.His sister Mary is playing computer games.Their father and grandfather are playing chess. Their mother and grandmother are talking.Then I'm say to Tom:"How a nice family you are!"

错误如下：
visit to my friend → visit my friend
getting → get
I'm → I
How → What
you are → it is

visit my friend
getting to his home

应该是How a nice family are you!"

want→went 已经去了，而不是想去
visit to →visit “visit sb”是固定词组
getting→got get不是延续性动词，而且是过去发生
is→was，are→were 应该用过去式
I'm→I “sb say to/tell sb”固定用法
How a nice family you are→What a nice family you have/a nice family it is

改后文章：
Today is Sunny.I went to visit my friend,Tom.When I got his home,he was doing his homework.His sister Mary was playing computer games.Their father and grandfather were playing chess. Their mother and grandmother were talking.Then I say to Tom:"What a nice family you have!"