UC知道英语短文请大家帮忙改正
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good afternoon everyone，today I want to say something about the
audio in my dormitory。several days ago, one of my roommates suggestted that we need to buy a audio 。although I protestted the plan，the others roommates agree with him.So I had to compromise.Now we need a audio ,but I can't sleep well.While my dormitory have electricity，noise will be never stop.So I could noly wait for the power cut every day.(?????????)that‘s all ，thank you。
请大家帮我改正下啊，我有很多地方都不知道
1.我用dormitory作大学宿舍可以么，有没有更合适的
2.one of my roommates suggestted that we need to buy a audio这这句中的suggest that后面可以跟need to么
3.时态问题，中间我有部分用的是过去时态，这样对不对？可不可以都用一般现在时
4.倒数第二句打“？？？？？”的地方还应该说句什么呢，总觉得这样结尾太突然
5.还有什么其它错误的地方
good afternoon everyone，today I would like to say something about the stereo in my dormitory.Several days ago, one of my roommates suggested that we should buy a stereo. Although I protested against the plan，the other roommates all agreed with him.So I had no choice but to compromise.Since we had it, I can't sleep well.As long as my dormitory has electricity supply，the noise will never stop.So I could only wait until the power cut every day.That's all,thank you for your attention.
我改过了,你读读看
1. Dorm 就可以了
2. a audio肯定是错的。最起码该用an吧。如果你是指“音响”的请用stereo 或stereo system
3. 时态要统一。建议都用过去式
4. 已做修改
5.
Good afternoon everyone!
Today I'm gonna talk about the new stereo in my dorm room, which has been bothering me for quite a while. Several days ago, one of my roommates suggested that we get a stereo in our room. Although I protested against the plan，the other roommates agreed with him. So I had to compromise and put up with the