帮忙检查一下语法问题,顺便翻译一个句子

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my dream
Everyone has their own dream.I also have a dream.I dreamed to be a singer when I was a young girl.Three years later,I dreamed to be a designer.Because I saw a tv programme called Project runway.I dream to be a lawer.Because my sister graduated in law.I don't know what will I do in the future. 但是我的梦想还在继续。(翻译英文)
检查一下语法 有没有什麼不对的 可以补充的 谢谢撒!~~~~

首先一个问题,dream的过去时是dreamt,不是dreamed.另外文章中还有些小词用的不好,我帮你顺了一遍。
My Dream

Everyone has his own dream,so do I. I dreamt to be a singer when I was a little girl. Then I dreamt to be a designer after I saw a tv program called Project Runaway. I dreamt to be a lawyer,because my sister(如果不是亲姐姐的话,用cousin) graduated in law. I don't know what to do in the future,but my dreams will go on.