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It was only recently that I realized what my real role would be. And realized what kind of country is suitable for me. I’m an assiduous,accommodating and humorous boy, sedulity and preciseness are my main characteristics. I am convinced that the education system in Britain is more academic and professional. Because Britain has a long history in higher education,

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The principal reason for my desire to study at UK is the quality of teaching here and particularly in my chosen subject. I also find exciting the prospect of joining a university here with international flavours and exceptional research facilities. I believe University is a place for accumulating more interests, for meeting people, for working hard, for finding a niche in life. I feel I have the commitment and confidence of giving my best during my university career and afterwards