请大家帮忙改一下英语演讲稿

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请大家帮帮忙,我们学校办了个演讲比赛,我准备了个演讲稿,但自我感觉写得很搓,希望大家帮忙改改,谢谢了
Success is obviously an high-frequency word in our daily life. "The Road to Success" or "10 Points of Being Successful" was often choosen to named a training program. It seemed that there was always a voice emphasizing on my growing : "You should work hard so that after graduate what waiting for you is great job. And after getting a good job you should earn your first millions. driving BMW or sitting in the first-class cabin."
So I worked hard to achieve that goal. One day mum suggested me to go abroad after undergraduate to live a better life.
"Don't worry about us, we will just move into the home for the aged" mum said peacefully.
The word striked me as a belling ringing in my head. So I began to rethink of the plan. Am I too self-centered? Am I too impulsive? For years I just concerned about my own career and had ignored too much of the people around me.
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Success is obviously an(a) high-frequency(High-frequency 有点怪,用frequently used) word in our daily life. "The Road to Success" or "10 Points of Being Successful" was(were) often choosen to named(name) a training program. It seemed that there was always a voice emphasizing on my growing(growth) : "You should work hard so that after graduate what waiting for you is great job. And after getting a good job you should earn your first millions. driving BMW or sitting in the first-class cabin."
So I worked hard to achieve that goal. One day mum(mom) suggested me to go abroad after undergraduate to live a better life.
"Don't worry about us, we will just move into the home for the aged(seniors)" mum(mom) said peacefully.
The word striked me as a belling(bell) ringing in my head. So I began to rethink of the plan. Am I too self-centered? Am I too impulsive? For years I just concerned about my own career and had ignored too much of th