UC知道求对一篇英语演讲稿的一些意见
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In December 1898, thanks to the effort of the Hundred Days Reform ,Peking University was established in Beijing. The new era of modern education system finally came to this ancient and magnificent land. It was the best of time, it was the worst of time, it was the age of faith and eagerness , it was the age of academic freedom. It was the best of time, because of academic freedom , Countless of famous faculties, remarkable scholars and brilliant scientists have emerged and gone through the current of time, because of academic freedom ,the campuses of universities became a sacred place where these thirsty minds could pursuit for knowledge and truth , a peaceful place where different opinions could exist in harmony, a righteous place where upright professors and honest students could stand up and call on peace and democracy out of their conscience and patriotic hearts. it was the worst of time, universities in china could
语法上好多错误（特别多comma slice,就是该分新句子的时候本该用period却用了comma)。
例如，It was the best of time, it was the worst of time, it was the age of faith and eagerness , it was the age of academic freedom.
这是四句话，必须4个句号。非要写在一起的话
It was the best of time and also the worst of time. ( best of time?? best time??)
It was the age of faith and eagerness and also the age of academic freedom.
再比如这个
It was the best of time, because of academic freedom , (that) Countless of famous faculties, remarkable scholars and brilliant scientists have（had?) emerged and gone through the current of time. (It was the best of time, )because of academic freedom , (that) the campuses of universities became a sacred place where these thirsty minds could pursuit for knowledge and truth , a peaceful place where different opinions could exist in harmony, (and) a righteous place where upright professors and honest students could stand up and call on peace and democracy out of their co