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题目： My winter holiday
I like winter and I like winter holiday ,too.In winter holiday ,I alwys do my homework ,play basketball and play computer games.But I like play snow and make snowman best,because I like white and snow is white ,too.Snow is very clean ,I usually take two hours to play snow every day in winter holiday.I like my winter holiday ,it is very exciting.Do you like winter holiday?
I like winter and I like winter holiday ,too.In winter holiday ,I alwys do my homework ,play basketball and play computer games.But I like play snow and make snowman best,because I like white and snow is white ,too.Snow is very clean ,I usually take two hours to play snow every day in winter holiday.I like my winter holiday ,it is very exciting.Do you like winter holiday?
好多地方好别扭
第2行 But I like play 应该是playing
第2行 and make snowman 应该是making
because I like white and snow is white 不知道对不对我觉得尤其是and用得不好吧？
play snow 我觉得是play with snow
alwys应该是打错了吧？ 是always
个人意见啊 有错的别骂我~~
有错！alwys是always