热心肠的英语高手来

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/11 04:18:34
帮我检查下这段口语,是否有问题,并且改正,解说详细点!用翻译工具的就不要来了!
because as you know, almost all the girls I know believe they are overweight and they regard YOGA as an excellent way to keep their body shape slim.

As what you should know, almost every girl feels insecure about their body and would like to keep their body in shape. Yoga is widely recognized as an excellent way of losing weight and becoming fit.

(呵呵同意同意。。。我就是女的,立志减肥却从未成功。。。唉)

are overweight 改成 overweigh,这里用动词比较好。
keep their body shape slim 改成keep fit就够了 保持苗条,保持身材。

就像你所看到的,几乎所有的女孩都认为自己体重超标,并且认为瑜伽是一个保持苗条身材的绝妙方法。

应该没错