请大家帮我看句话
来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/27 11:35:43
Moreover, they are inclined to being a historical inheritance in the view of people in current time instead of being a tool forcing people to submit or obey the rules in ancient time.
从语法上看,若各位还有更好表达请写下来。
这句话是不是有错误啊
从语法上看,若各位还有更好表达请写下来。
这句话是不是有错误啊
Besides, they prefer being a legacy in the mind of contemporary than a compulsion in the past.
语法错误:
1,inclined to being 中, being应该改为be
2,in the view of people in current time,最好改为from modern view
3,instead of being a tool forcing people to submit, submit 后应该加个to。
Moreover, they are inclined to be a historical inheritance in the view of people in current time instead of being a tool for which forcing people to obey the rules in ancient time.
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