自己写的英语作文。请帮忙修正。

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一篇对比文。比较以前的自己和现在的自己。刚学英语。很多错误。请帮助修正。谢谢。

Me –now vs. Me-past

As we know everyone have recollected, I would like hold on these memory. Compared to adult me and child me, there are many differences between the two. However, the truth is that adult me and child me so different, but still be a same person. “Child me” and “Adult me” in three sides make each one quite distinct from the other.
Outward appearance is perhaps the first difference. When I was kid, I had long hair. I cut my hair when I met lose; it can help me broken dejected. So I have short hair now. As opposed to child me, adult me is a fat cat. Although this may be true, I still self-hypnogenesis: I am a slim-Jim.
A second different is sense. For instance, child me is really artlessness. I though everyone could be nice person in this wonderful world in past. But I met many bad person when I walking my life road. I cannot easily believe anyone. I know I lose my artless heart. Whereas I was very ha

As we know everyone has recollected things, I would like to hold on these memories. Compared to adult me and child me, there are many differences between these two. However, the truth is that adult me and child me are so different, but still be a same person. “Child me” and “Adult me” in three sides make each one quite distinct from the other.
Outward appearance is perhaps the first difference. When I was a kid, I had long hair. I cut my hair when I met loss; it can help me broken dejected. So I have short hair now. As is opposed to child me, adult me is like a fat cat. Although this may be true, I still self-hypnogenesis: I am a slim-Jim.
The second difference is sense. For instance, child me is really artlessness. I thought everyone could be a nice person in this wonderful world in the past. But I met many bad person when I am walking on my life road. I can hardly believe anyone. I know I have losed my artless heart. Whereas I was very happy in the past, but it could n