请大家帮我改错

Dear Jimmy

I have not receive your message for a long time. How are you? How do you like the college lift?
Last month, I made a big decision. I made up me mind to go and studied abroad. So, I spend two hours learn English every day and I take a self-study examination. Because it will get college diploma. The time is passing! So I will need to study hard to make my dream come true. The same to you. We have the same dream now. I believe “knowledge is power”. The world is unfair, we must accept it. I will write to you once a month. I have to stop now. bye!

Your best friend
Howard Lee
一封写给我朋友的信 请帮忙改一下错误的地方 我的英语水平不太好
谢谢了。。

receive改成received

lift改成life

me改成my

studied改成study

I take a self-study examination改成I'm going to take the self-study examination

it will get college diploma改成it will get me a college diploma

The time is passing改成Time and tide wait for no one.

we must accept it前面加but

（基本上还写得不错；有些地方应该是粗心所致，例如life写成lift，并非你本身的水平问题）

Dear Jimmy

I have not heard from you for a long time. How are you? How do you like your college life?
Last month, I made a big decision. I made up me mind to go and study abroad. So I spend two hours learning English every day. I'll take an examination which can confer a college certificate. Time flies! Now I have to study hard to make my dream come true. The same to you. We have the same dream now. I believe “knowledge is power”. The world is unfair, we must accept it. I will write to you once a month. Time for study, so I have to stop now. Bye!