这句英文有错吗？请大家帮忙纠正！

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/21 17:13:58
The competitions really gave me many opportunity for self-development.And also make me interest in electronic design,programming and mathematical modelling.

我想说“这些竞赛给了我很多自我发展的机会，并且也使得我对1，2，3产生了兴趣”。 谢谢！

these competitions have really
given my many opportunities
for self-promotion and also
made me get interest in
electonic designing,programming
and mathematical modelling.

The competitions have given me many opportunities for self-development. Besides, thanks to it, I've got interested in electronic design,programming and mathematical modelling.

opportunity 应该用复数的吧。。。

interest 应该改成 interested

opportunities
make-made
intrest-intrested

opportunity 改为 opportunities 复数

make me interest 改为 make me be interest

其他的都不错的，嘿嘿

The -Those 或许更地道些
design-designing
感觉你翻译的很别扭
.And -,and also aroused my intrest in...