UC知道哪位帮我改一下英文演讲稿
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主题是关系自己的家人和朋友，享受生活，不要一心扑在事业上
那个，再顺便帮我想个题目吧
Nowadays,more and more people put their heart on how to be a successed man,they work hard everyday to gain money,to improve their career,nevertheless,at the same time,they have already lost a lot.
When being asked what is you dream in the furture,many people will say they wanna have their own company or make a lot money,however,we seldom hear a man say"oh I wanna have a nice family."
It's that career so important even more important our family and fridens?One million dollors will take you fame,but it won't give you a family filled with love and happiness or a loyal friend
It seems like many person has already forget many important meaning about their lives.There is no doubt that we live is to live a happy life,Many books about how to be succeful have sells in many bookstore,but I have never seen a book tells you how to live a better life ,how to get
第二行a successed man改为successful men everyday改为every day 第三行career改为careers
第二段第一行what is you dream 改为what you dream is 第二行company改为companies
第三段第一句改为Is the career even more important than our family and friends? 第二行take改为bring
第四段第一行like改为that person 改为people has改成have 第二行meaning改为meanings There is no doubt that we live is to live a happy life改为There is no doubt that we live to lead a happy life. 第四行sells改为benn sold tells改为telling
第五段第一行Family and friend 改为Families and friends 第二行word改为world 第三行lost改为lose is fail 改为fails but you friends and you family改为your friends and your family They are the treasure cannot be taken by money or power or anything else. 改为They are the treasure that cannot be taken place of by money or power or anything else.
第六段others can also take the things you can take by money away by using money
第七段第二行you改为your 第三行delight改为be delighted