大家帮我看看我写的英语作文有没有语病！！我是小学五年级学生!

保证是对的，我初一，新概念英语2！

The lamp is on the white desk。I always do my homework in the desk.my cupboardarepurple and white . 1[It’s ]my favourite 2[color] .3[ It’s ] very dreamily 4[color ]. The bed is 5[near ] the computer.the 6[ bookcases ]is next to the bed.There are some books 7[on ]the bookcases.
This is my room.I like my room.8[ and ]you？
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It’s my favourite color.It’s very dreamily color 改 They are my favourite color.They are very dreamily color
and you？改 how about you?

The lamp is on the white desk。I always do my homework on the desk.my cupboard is purple and white .It’s my favourite color.It’s a very dreamily color. The bed is near the computer.the bookcases is next to the bed.There are some books on the bookcase.
This is my room.I like my room. Do you like my room?
把上面的照抄一遍，然后就没有了

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