UC知道帮忙改一下英语作文!谢谢!加一个结局更好!有什么想法可以告诉我!
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Dear students,
We will visit Zhongshan hight school on Saturday.You should go to school at 7'oclock we will take a walk too Zhongshan hight school .You should write interesting things .You must remember don't run and shout.You should bring a pen and a book .If you can do better you'll have a great time.
We will visit Zhongshan hight school on Saturday.You should go to school at 7'oclock we will take a walk too Zhongshan hight school .You should write interesting things .You must remember don't run and shout.You should bring a pen and a book .If you can do better you'll have a great time.
Dear students,
We are organising a visit to Zhongshan high school on Saturday.Please get to school at 7 o'clock and then we plan to get there on foot.You could note something interesting as many as possible.Don't leave far away from our team and keep quiet during visit.Have a great time.
连贯的强制语气听起来不舒服’should’
熟记一些词组会好些．简单的改了一下
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