英语作文 let kids enjoy holidays

Usually,kids are very busy with their lessons in the school hours,and after school,they have to do lots of homework and take part in different learning groups.During the summer and winter holidays,they still have too much to do with their lessons.Therefore,the kids have lost their instinct which makes them cute and lovely.For the teachers and parents,they should think about this.Is it suitable for the kids to keep busy all day long?They even have no time to relax themselves.Personally I think,we should reduce the burden on the kids and give them more freedom and choices.Let them be themselves.Then,they will have a happy life both in the family and in the school as well.

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