UC知道帮我改下这个英语短文。谢谢。
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When I began my university life, I became more and more busy. Let me tell you about it.
I get up at six o'clock, that's early. I'm always sleepy. Then I brush my teeth and eat breakfast.I usually have Chaos and deep-fried dough sticks. I go to school at six thirty, it takes me about thirty minutes to get to school. School starts at eight o'clock. I have four classes in the morning and four in the afternoon. My favorite class in School is music and English,because it's interesting, and our teacher is very nice. what a pity! School ends at four thirty, I get home around five thirty, I rest for a little time, then I have dinner.After dinner I do my homework, then is the relaxing time, I usually watch TV or readings.. About ten o’clock I take a shower and then go to sleep
I have a busy life,but I'm happy everyday
When I began my university life, I became more and more busy. Let me tell you about it.
I get up at six o'clock, that's early. I'm always sleepy. Then I brush my teeth and eat breakfast.I usually have Chaos and deep-fried dough sticks. I go to school at six thirty, it takes me about thirty minutes to get to school. School starts at eight o'clock. I have four classes in the morning and four in the afternoon. My favorite class in School is music and English,because it's interesting, and our teacher is very nice. what a pity! School ends at four thirty, I get home around five thirty, I rest for a little time, then I have dinner.After dinner I do my homework, then is the relaxing time, I usually watch TV or readings.. About ten o’clock I take a shower and then go to sleep
I have a busy life,but I'm happy everyday
晕，你已经大学了，英语还是很烂啊。几乎全篇都要换啦。
首先～时态就不对～为什么要用过去式？用一般式才对～。。。。。。还有。。。。。。额。。。很会报流水帐的一位哥哥或者姐姐哦～