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Today smoking is a widespread habit all over the world. However, smoking is harmful to one’s health. It contributes a lot of lung cancer, from which many people have died in the past years. It can also cause many other diseases. Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money. More and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is. But they are never bored with it. Some people think it is a kind of fashion, some think it is of great fun and others think that smoking can refresh them.
But in my opinion, living is cherishing what you own. For live is a paradox: More gain, more loss. Just like smoking, from which you gain the pleasure, yet at the same time, loss your health. I tried to give up smoking several times, but I always started smoking again a few days later. I think it’s really painful to quit it, so I decide to give up my mind. I just want to enjoy the process of my life, instead of feeling the result of my life.
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Nowaday,many people like smoking, smoking is a widespread habit all over the world. However, smoking is harmful to one’s health. It contributes a lot of lung cancer, from which many people have died in the past years. It can also cause many other diseases. Meanwhile smoking is a waste of money. More and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is. But they are never bored with it. Some people think it is a kind of fashion, some think it is of great fun and others think that smoking can refresh them.
And many people like smoking started in sudents,first,the think:it can't be a bad habit.but when they are smoking , they can not stop,it bad for themself.
But in my opinion, living is cherishing what you own. For live is a paradox: More gain, more loss. Just like smoking, from which you gain the pleasure, yet at the same time, loss your health. I tried to give up smoking several times, but I always started smoking again a few days later. I think it’s reall