UC知道请大家帮忙修改修改 谢谢
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我的弟弟是个冷漠的人。他总是拒绝别人的帮助。他对计算机硬件很感兴趣。他知道计算机是由显示器、鼠标、键盘、主板、内存、CPU等制造而成。他去年报名参加一个计算机竞赛，并且获得了一等奖。我真为他感到自豪。
My brother was a cold fish. He always refused to someone’s help. He was interested in computer hardware. He knew that computer made from screen, mouse, main board, memory, CPU and so on. He entered for a computer competition last year, and had won the first prize. I was proud of him.
就语法和用词 修改 谢谢
My brother was a cold fish. He always refused to someone’s help. He was interested in computer hardware. He knew that computer made from screen, mouse, main board, memory, CPU and so on. He entered for a computer competition last year, and had won the first prize. I was proud of him.
就语法和用词 修改 谢谢
My brother is a cold fish. He always refuse other's help. He is interested in computer hardware. He knows that a computer is consisted of screen, mouse, main board, memory, CPU and so on. He took part in a computer competition last year and won the top prize. I （was）am proud of him.
注意时态，描述用一般现在时，否则看起来就像是一个去了的人。去年参加比赛用一般过去就可以了。had won不对。
我真为他感到自豪，这个如果你是为他比赛获奖自豪就用was， 如果为他整个人自豪而言就用am。
My brother was a cold fish. He always refused to receive others' help. Interested in computer hardware, he knew that a computer consisted of a screen,a mouse,a main board,a memory,a CPU and so on. He participated in a computer competition last year and had won the first prize. I was proud of him.