英语作文,好的加分~

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请给我写一篇“我妈妈的职业”和“一次上海之旅”,50字左右,不要有语法错误,2分文采分要拿到。句型不要单一,要用优美的次形容。谢谢,好的加分~~

1.My mother's job
My mother serves as a math teacher in a middle school.She works hard and devotes herself to his students.She was good at teaching and all the students in her class like her.I learn a lot not only about math but also about life from her.She is a good teacher as well as a kind mother.
2.A trip to Shanghai.
I will never forget the trip together with my family to Shanghai.We stayed in the Jinqiao hotel and spent two days in Shanghai.We visited the Oriental Bright Pearl TV Tower,we went shopping in the Nanjing Road where is the busiest place in Shanghai.We also had a sightseeing of the Huangpu river in a boat.That was indeed a wonderful trip.

(A Trip To Shanghai)
I took a trip to Shanghai with my mother during the seven-day holiday. It took us more than two hours to drive to Shanghai from my home in Haimen. We stayed in a large hotel on the eighth floor. On the first day, I just stayed in the hotel and rested. On the second day, my brothe