大家帮我来改演讲稿

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下面是我的英语演讲稿，是3分钟长的！我是大学生，演讲稿好像有点简单老师说我的演讲没有激情，现在我要改一下稿子，让结尾在激情一些！帮帮我吧，对我很重要！
Motherland in my heart forever
Ladies and gentlemen , boys and girls:
Good evening,
I feel great honor to be here, well, the topic I am going to deal with is my motherland,
Everyone in the world, motherland is their mother, we are under the protection of our mother wherever we go, feel the deep love she gives , so if you ask me : what is your mother like
The followings is my answer a true stream long flowing in my heart
A beautiful country standing in the east of the world ,she has yellow soil her body grand mountains her bosom long rivers her blood and hardworking people her children us she is just like a diamond ,shinning all the time ,you guessed it she is my dearest country china
Nice motherland, I love the different races of my country, each race has its own culture and customs some people are kindhearted ,some are generous and some are humorous anyway dis

希望你给我多加点分！

　　谢谢！

　　Motherland in my heart forever
　　Ladies and gentlemen , boys and girls:
　　Good evening,
　　I feel great honor to be here, well, the topic I am going to deal with is my motherland,
　　Everyone in the world, motherland is their mother, we are under the protection of our mother wherever we go, feel the deep love she gives , so if you ask me : what is your mother like
　　The followings is my answer a true stream long flowing in my heart
　　A beautiful country standing in the east of the world ,she has yellow soil her body grand mountains her bosom long rivers her blood and hardworking people her children us she is just like a diamond ,shinning all the time ,you guessed it she is my dearest country china
　　Nice motherland, I love the different races of my country, each race has its own culture and customs some people are kindhearted ,some are generous and some are humorous anyway displaying every race is beyond me ,b