英文自我介绍 帮忙翻译一下

I'm outgoing ,enthusiastic and strong in communication.
Like singing ,surfing on the internet,and shopping.
Reading is my favourite hobby. Sometimes I'd like to write something by myself.
问一下你老师是不是这样翻译的

Outgoing, enthusiasm and communication ability. Usually like singing, Internet, and shopping. Reading is one of the biggest hobby, sometimes likes to write something by yourself
这是我从一个桌面词典里翻译出来的，我认为那个词典里翻译的还行
你要是觉得不把握就在找懂的人翻译一下

Character cheerful, warm and communication ability. Usually like singing, Internet, and shopping. Reading is one of the biggest hobby, sometimes likes to write something by yourself.
看哈还可以么

Outgoing personality, enthusiasm, strong communication skills. Usually like to sing, Internet, shopping. Reading is the greatest love, and some time to write something like their own.

Disposition extroversion,
warm, communication ability.
Usually likes singing, the surfer, window-shops.
Reading