求篇雅思口语，关于dream home的

自己写的记得清～有少的语法错误是没关系的～保持微笑，放慢语速～～加油！！！

在王陆的口语里有这个话题的，而且有参考答案~

What makes a home?Love and sympathy and confidence.It is a place where kindly affections exist among all the members of the family.The parents take good care of their children,and the children are interested in the activities of their parents.Thus all of them are bound together by affection,and they find their home to be the cheeriest place in the world.
A home without love is no more than a home than a body without a soul is a man.Every civilized person is a social being.No one should live alone.A man may lead a successful and prosperous life,but prosoerity alone can by no means insure happiness.
Your home may be poor and humble,but your duty lies there.You should try your best to make it cheerful and comfortable.The greater the difficulties,the richer will be your reward.
A home is more than a family dwelling.It is a school in which people are trained for citizenship.A man will not render good