一篇英语的小作文12句左右

Shanghai is a modern city.The traffic here is quite convenient.Then do you now what the traffic in Shanghai will be in 10 years? It is interesting to image it.Perhaps people won't use perture any longer. Then there would be less air pollution. And I also suppose the traffic will be faster and more comefortable. Maybe we won't travel by ferry. We will travel by underground,taxi,maglev and so on. However, the traffic will possibly be overcrowding. But I think the traffic in ten years will be better.

我说你这个小朋友，in 10 years' time 是10年后的，而不是10年前的,是吧 ?确认后我帮你写。

Perhaps 10 years ago ，people in Shanghai are usually traveled by boat or by car。People all love to go to parties and a wonderful trip。…… （把分给我吧!我分好少的！谢拉！!!!!!!)

in表示是10年后，你还是按1楼的建议确认下先