UC知道麻烦各位老师，高手帮忙看看下面的作文（高考），打个分
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麻烦各位老师帮忙看看下面的作文，打个分（满分20，按高考作文评分标准打）点评一下，有话就直说，希望大家能给一些建议，不胜感激！
题目：
1读完这篇文章你有什么感想？（关于母爱的）
2.写一次难忘的你与母亲相处的经历
3你如何表达对母亲的爱
就上面3个问题写一篇英语作文。
1号文
After reading the story given above ,I am moved by what the boy’s mother said. It’s his mother that makes me realize how much my mother has done for me,which I ignored in the past 18 years.Love from my mother is the same as flowers ,giving out the perfume but never ask for any approval or reward.
The experience I got along with my mother will never escap from my menmory.The time I failed in the exam ,I was so despair that I cried in room secertly.Maybe my mother found that I was different from the usual days,she came tomy hone with a glass of milk.I was too shocked to say a word.Mum just said,‘No matter what happen,I will be here.Everyone may suffer failure ,and it’s what make you strong”.Simple as the word was,I was greatly engeraged and gained the confitdence again.
In order to show my love to my mo
题目：
1读完这篇文章你有什么感想？（关于母爱的）
2.写一次难忘的你与母亲相处的经历
3你如何表达对母亲的爱
就上面3个问题写一篇英语作文。
1号文
After reading the story given above ,I am moved by what the boy’s mother said. It’s his mother that makes me realize how much my mother has done for me,which I ignored in the past 18 years.Love from my mother is the same as flowers ,giving out the perfume but never ask for any approval or reward.
The experience I got along with my mother will never escap from my menmory.The time I failed in the exam ,I was so despair that I cried in room secertly.Maybe my mother found that I was different from the usual days,she came tomy hone with a glass of milk.I was too shocked to say a word.Mum just said,‘No matter what happen,I will be here.Everyone may suffer failure ,and it’s what make you strong”.Simple as the word was,I was greatly engeraged and gained the confitdence again.
In order to show my love to my mo
短文求精不求多。这类短文必须涉及所学知识点也要符合题意。
但高考时短文没错就是满分（太简单了也不好）我认为你自己写的打18或19分吧
19
还可以
据需努力
30分
还可以
很不错