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Dear Maria,

I feel so exciting to hear from you. Now I'd like to tell you something about me. In my family, my father is a doctor, mom is a bank clerk, and I have a brother who is still a student. My dream is to be a journalist in future.
The weather of the city I live is bad, because summer days is very hot while winter days is very cold.
In my spare time I like music very much, both classic and rock. Do you like music too? I also like pets and I have a dog.
Hope to your reply. All the best!

Yours,
Jenny

Dear Maria,
I'm glad that we could have this chance to know each other. i want to take a moment to introduce myself. I like animals. that's why I have a cat at home. I also love pop music. my father is a doctor. He has his own practice in our city. My Mom is a bank clerk. I am still in High School. and my younger brother is in the Middle School. I wish I could be a news reporter when I grow up. The weather in the to