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Weather Can Effect Our Mood
Our mood is not only controled by ourselves as we think but also effected by the things around us.Weather is one of thoses things which could effect or even decide our mood.A sunny day always bring a man a bright state.A cloudy and dark sky can make people feel sad sometimes.There are man who like rains,they enjoy walking in the rain.And children feel really excited when the world turns whole white,snow brought them a lot of happiness.Also to the lovers walking in the snow is a romantic thing.
Well thoses proves that weather do effect our mood.

翻译：我们的情绪不仅是我们想象的那样仅仅被自己所控制，他同时也被我们身边的事物所左右。天气就是那些能影响甚至决定我们情绪的事物之一。阳光明媚一天总是带给人一种敞亮的心境。而多云的阴天有时使人感到难过。有人很喜欢下雨，他们陶醉于走在雨中的感觉。在整个世界变成白色的时候孩子们总是很激动，雪给他们带来了许多快乐。同样对于情侣而言，在雪中漫步是在浪漫不过了。
这些都说明了天气对人的情绪有影响。

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