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上个周末，我们学校举行了郊外野餐活动，我也参加了。非常的激动人心！我们在学校大门口集合，上午8点出发去距学校10公里的人民公园。首先，我们划船、那非常危险但是很有趣！然后我们去野餐，那食物真是美味极了！并且我们拍了许多美丽的照片、瞧！他们笑的多开心！最后，我们参观了动物公园，我们看到了许多可爱的动物，比如说熊猫、大象、猴子…… 然后大家依依不舍的在下午3点乘坐公共汽车返回学校！总而言之，郊外野餐活动丰富了我们的课间活动，我喜欢它！

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Last weekend, our school picnic held in the park . I joined it. It's very exciting! We set the gate at school, 8:00 to start school 10 kilometers away from the People's Park. First of all, we were boating, it is very dangerous but very interesting! Then we went to a picnic, and that food was very delicious! And we made a lot of beautiful photos, Look! They laugh more than happy! Finally, we visited the animal park, we saw a lot of cute animals, such as pandas, elephants, monkeys ... ... and then we reluctantly in the 15 o'clock bus back to school! In short, the outskirts of picnic activities make our schoollife colorful .I like it!

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