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Please keep your working area clean and tidy, and dress yourself formally to welcome our clients who will visit our GZ office tomorrow.Thank you for your cooperation.

Please Keep your working area clean and get dressed in formal clothes to welcome our clients vistiing our GZ office tomorrow.Thank you for your support.

in formal clothes可以直接改成formally
for welcome改成for welcoming或者to welcome
clients改成clients'

Please keep your working area clean and dress formally to welcome our clients visitng GZ office tomorrow.

明天请保持工作环境整洁，着正装欢迎我们的客人参观我们的广州办公室。感谢您的支持！