高手帮忙改一下～很急～高分！

Am I crazy? Maybe, who knows?
（Probably nobody does, even I.）表意不清
Now, she’s gone forever, and nobody knows me better than she does. Everything happened and ended too fast.
She knows that we shouldn’t love each other, but in this world, you can control everything except your sentiments.后半句太绝对
If someone tells you: « I will love you forever », are you going to believe it?
Before I met her, I would say that I would never believe something that could endure forever.endure是忍耐的意思，用last
This story begins the 14th February at 8:32 p.m.介词 at（说实话，有点巧合）

I was ready to jump, ready to end up my miserable life in this gloomy night. Who cares about me? I’m alone in this world. I have no family, no friends, and a lot of debt.and改为only 不然造成歧义
At least, I was glad that everything will be resolved after my death. resolve不是解决的意思，用solved
Maybe, the next morning, people will find my name on the corner of a newspaper and they will read