请帮我纠正这句英语句子结构~！

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From the last sentence of the paragraph above, the readers shall figure out the relationship between Scarlett and Atlanta is very intimate.
意思是： 从上面的段落中，读者们可以发现斯嘉丽与亚特兰大的关系非常紧密。
如果觉得哪个词用的不恰当，也请帮我指出来！ 谢谢！
还有这句话……

The reason why she feels so intimate with this city is that Scarlett is told by her father that she and Atlanta are christened in the same year.
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这两句话是要阐述一个事实，需要用现在时，请别跟我说关于时态上的问题。 谢谢！

第一句：From the last sentence of the paragraph above, the readers should figure out that the relationship between Scarlett and Atlanta is very intimate.

第二句：The reason why she feels so intimate with this city is that Scarlett is told by her father that she and Atlanta were christened in the same year.

figure out 后面加that 因为后面接的是宾语从句

第二个问题 are christened in the same year 改为were christened in the same year 用过去时 因为从句子的意思可以判断 她们在同一年洗礼这件事发生在过去

figure out 后面加上THAT，
另外 shall 改为SHOULD更好一些

第一个句子需要加figure out 'that' the relation ship... 以此来引导从句。
或是变成：...the readers shall figure out the very intimate relationahip between Scarlett and Atlanta.

第二句话：...she and Atlanta were christened in the same year