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the reason of rural laborers in big city
nowadays，we can see many news about many rural laborers in big
city，and lisen many reason about it 。i think the reason is that
society developed quickly
we know the number of laborer are enormous in china ，and their
life is not comfortable ，which is one of the reason that they come into big city 。big city offer them chance to change their life ，such as make more money ，watch the world，study some skills and so
on。but i think there is more important reason is that their children need better economy and culture environment to development
themselves 。in fact ，that is a society problem ，city’economy
develop quickly ，country 's far away from city',this make many rural laborers go into city for more comfortable life
in total, that has many reasons in this question ,and, that
seem like nice things that people look for better life are formal

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The Reason of Rural Laborers in Big City
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We can see many（news不可数，只能用 much或a lot of） news about many rural laborers in big city，and lisen （此处大概想说“听到”，可以用learn）many（改为much） reason about it. I think the reason is that society developed （用完成时态 has developed）quickly.
We know the number of laborers（用复数） are enormous in china ，and their
life is （lives are）not comfortable ，which is one of the reasons（复数） that they come into big city(复数cities；另外renson前要加for，或者整句改为why they come into big cities). Big city (cities)offer them chance (chances) to change their life (loves)，such as (to) make more money ，(to) watch (改为look into)the world，(to)study (改为learn)some skills and so on。But I think there is （改为are）more important reason （用复数reasons）is （is 去掉）that their children need better economy and culture environment to development （用动词 develop）themselves 。In fact ，that is a society problem ，city economy （has）
develop（ed） quickly ，（and the ecomo