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题目是Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer..

Now movies is a very important part of our daily life.There are many types of movie.But each of them make you feel different.Some people is fascinated by the movies which make us think.While others,on the contrary,prefer to see the movies only for entertainment.As my point of view.I’d like to see the serious movies.
The very important reason is that this kind of movies may be can help you find the right way and the right answer when you feel confused.For example.i was born in a basketball family.There was always a dream keep in my mind:to be a bastetball superstar.But things changed because of a match in my high school.Our team was beaten.Completely lose.A terrible concept came up to my mind:give up.when I turned on the DVD player.The movie <life for m

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