UC知道高分悬赏修改英语作文（改得好改的快有追加分）
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Did you hear the story about the HOU YI(后羿) ？He shot down nine suns 。But this is only a story。The sun is one of the stars in the galaxy。The sun is about fifteen billion km from the earth. Too far away.If you go there by plane 。It needs 20 years.The sun like the basketball.
But it is really big. The sun has a volume of forteen billion one hundred twenty million cubic kilometer. And the center of the sun is very hot. It’s one hundred fifty billion eight thousand and four hundred degrees.Can houyi shot down the sun? No. It’s too difficult to did it.But sun is really an interesting star.
咳咳，这是本人呕心沥血经过n个翻译软件加上自己苦思冥想，才写出来的，但还是有语法错误，请大家帮忙改一下，谢谢
But it is really big. The sun has a volume of forteen billion one hundred twenty million cubic kilometer. And the center of the sun is very hot. It’s one hundred fifty billion eight thousand and four hundred degrees.Can houyi shot down the sun? No. It’s too difficult to did it.But sun is really an interesting star.
咳咳，这是本人呕心沥血经过n个翻译软件加上自己苦思冥想，才写出来的，但还是有语法错误，请大家帮忙改一下，谢谢
have you heard the story of HouYi? He had shotted downn nine suns, however it's just a story. The sun is about fifteen billion km from the earth.that's a long distance. It needs 20 years by plane if you want go there.The sun likes basketball,and it is really big.The sun has a volume of forteen billion one hundred twenty million cubic kilometer. .It's very hot in the center of the sun,and the temerature reaches to one hundred fifty billion eight thousand and four hundred degrees. Can he shotted down the sun? No,It’s too difficult to did it.But the sun is really an interesting star.
kilometer 加上s
sun前面加the 因为是独一无二的
没有什么错，内但容不符合你说的[关于后羿的故事]