急需帮忙写篇雅思大作文,5.5标准就行~谢谢谢

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/08 01:19:58
Air traffic is increasingly leading to more noise, pollution and airport construction.
One reason for this is the growth in low-cost passenger flights, often to holiday destinations.
Some people say that governments should try to reduce air traffic by taxing it more heavily.
do you agree or disagree?
谢谢了,我当时就蒙了,给些实质性的观点也行,思路什么的,十分地感谢~

= =建议买本十天突破雅思写作.

虽然那些句子很扯淡,不过看一看还是有好处.

分析一下好了..

写四段折中,disagree.

开头段很好写,这里不多说.

第二段写政府用重税来限制这个状况的好处是什么.写短一点,是让步段.

例如,重税之下人们会选择使用其他的交通工具而不是飞机,政府得到更多的税收可以用于环保,因此会带来一系列的好处等等.

第三段提出你的观点,其实我们有更好的方法来解决这个问题,例如投资教育,增强人们环保的意识,加强其他公共交通工具的建设,等等.

结尾,even though高税限制很有用, i do not believe that is the best or only way来解决这个问题,其实政府 is supposed to........

大概就是这个样子啦...也不是很难想吧.

The argument that the flights should be restricted is invalid. Clearly, it is unconvincing to compare the volume of pollutants an airplane produces with that generated by an automobile, because an airplane is shared by many passengers while an automobile is usually for one or, at the best, several passengers.
Suppose a visitor drives 1,000 miles, burning 100 liter gasoline and emitting 10 cubic meter carbon dioxide, this very passenger is totally responsible for such an environment problem. But to what extent should anothe