大家来找茬!高级人士的问题~~~

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这是一篇推荐信,是导师推荐自己的学生给他将来的导师的,你能找出多少错来呢? 加油啊

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June 10th, 2009
Dear Professor,

As the special topic of finance course teacher of the recommended student **, I not only trained the student to acquire the independent ability of analyzing economic phenomenon, but also guided her to accomplish her graduation thesis, named < The Development and Reference of Foreign Investment Banks>.

During the process of teaching and learning, I know quite well that the student has good conduct and serious attitude towards study. She works with meticulous attention and conscientiously. She has sharp insight and reasonable understanding to questions. Furthermore, student ** spends much time on reading specialized books, which help her form a good specialized attainment. Besides, the student ** also has good development in other aspects as well as in studying. She won scholarships repeatedly, and played a centra

没有错哦^_^
有些句子我用了不同的表达,你参考一下。
( )的地方。。不是很确定你的意思。。。

As the special topic of finance course teacher of the recommended student **, I not only trained the student to acquire the independent ability of analyzing economic phenomenon, but also guided her to accomplish her graduation thesis, named < The Development and Reference of Foreign Investment Banks>.

--> I have known ** for the past ? years as she has taken the following course(s) which I teach: 「special topic of finance」. As her teacher. I trained her to acquire the ability of analyzing economic phenomenon independently, and also guided her in writing her graduate thesis, titled <The Development and Reference of Foreign Investment Banks>.

During the process of teaching and learning, I know quite well that the student has good conduct and serious attitude towards study. She works with meticulous attention and conscientiously. She has sharp insight and reasonable understan