看下这片文章，有什么语法错误吗

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Dear Amanda:
why do u call me Robyn?my name is chris johnson.
we must can be great penfriend.
you know,i'm a sporty boy.so i like watching CCTV5,which a channle is about sports. I like basketball very much.
you must know Yao Ming.he's a famous,respected player.
my favourite food is one of pancake made by my grandma.it's tasty with pepper.rice is Chinese staple food,i don't think it is delicious but it is really healthy~
i think school life is toilsome but also happy.I'll take a important exam next month.maybe i'll reply to your mail after that.
do u like watching films?'High School Musical'is the best one i have ever seen.i expect the school life like that.what about your favourite?
write me back, :)
PS:do you have MSN ID?you can add me at 123@live.cn
请各位大虾指出~

1.we must can be great penfriend 不知道你想讲什么，情太动词must can只能用一个，既然是我们 penfrined用复数penfriends

2.i'm a sporty boy 为什么不直接讲I like sports就完了，不用那么别扭
sporty 像运动家的, 直爽的不懂不要乱用

3.which a channle is about sports 定语从句，正解为which is a sports channle ,你写的用了了两个主语～～

4.my favourite food is one of pancake改为One of my favourite food is

5.it is really healthy × 有利于健康～～it's good to our healthy

6.but also also删了～

7.an important exam

8.i'll reply to your mail 改为 i'll reply to you 给某人回复，不是给某人的邮件回复

9.'High School Music'吧

10.MSN ID 要冠词 a MSN ID

至少是这些吧

有不少错误。。。

第三行去掉must
第四行 which is a channel of sports

第七行 is a kind of pancake
第9行。。。。life is not only toilsome。。。 take an important。。。

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