一道英语问题,请大家帮忙修改一下。

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(题目)You have won 10,000 yuan in a competition!Write about the things that you are going to do with the money!
(括号里是我填的答案,请大家帮忙修改一下,谢谢了,我英语很差)

First,I'm going to(go to Nanning run with my friend )
Second,I'm going(to riding a bicycle)
Next,I want to (flying a kite).I'm going to stay there for(three days.)
Then,I'm going(to visit a opera house)
Lastly, I want to(go to the park)

修改了你的答案
First,I'm going to(go to Nanning with my friend )
Second,I'm going(to ride a bicycle)
Next,I want to (fly a kite).I'm going to stay there for(three days.)
Then,I'm going(to visit a opera house)
Lastly, I want to(go to the park)

不过你的答案没体现题目的内容,应该填些花钱的活动吧。
改动了顺序,有条理些

First,I'm going to(buy some presents for family and friends)
Second,I'm going(to buy a bicycle)
Next,I want to (ride the bicycle to Nanning with my friend ).I'm going to stay there for(three days.)
Then,I'm going(to go to the park here and fly a kite )
Lastly, I want to(visit a opera house)

前三个空要改1.去掉run2.ride 3.fly