My favourite football player

My favourite football player is Jim Smith who comes from Great Britain. He is a 25 years old boy and looks tall and strong.He Lives in China and play for Changjiang Football Club now. Football is his job but his life is just not surrounded by it. He also has many hobbies such as studying Chinese, reading books and so on.He has a very great dream from when he is a little child.It is that to jion in England counrty team to play the World Cup.

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