请高手帮我看下语法错误!谢谢

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/23 07:31:06
1. The Titanic sank because it hit an enormous iceberg.
2. The astronaut who works in outplace with very low gravity.
3. Steve has to structure his program which is about the new building more carefully; otherwise, his boss will fire him.
4. Omar died in the fire because the fire fighter had no enough time to rescue him.
5. The government official announced they will help the company which is bankrupt immediately, eventually they have done nothing.
6. The straits of Gibraltar which is a important straits in European and Mediterranean Sea.
7. Studying English is a slow process, but if you study very hard, it will be easier.
8. If you have some psychologically problems, you need to see the doctor who is the expert in psychologically.
9. The atmosphere is weak, so we have to stop the air pollution.
10. Omar tried to persuade his son study hard, but is still doesn’t work.

第2局说的不错,但是是从句不是一个整句,
要改成句子应改为:The astronaut who works in outplace experiences very low gravity.

第3局语法也没错,有点绕,直接说Steve has to structure his new building's program more carefully好些:)

第四句,no enough time,直接说no time 或者 not enough time

第5句,前面是announced 为过去式,从句的动词也应为过去式they would help the company which was bankrupt immediately, 然后后边是句号就好了。

第6局,straits in European and Mediterranean Sea,地中海在欧洲,两者不是同等级。改为straits of Mediterranean Sea in Euro

第8句,psychologically为副词,改为psychological,然后you need to see the doctor who is the expert in psychologically。坚持用psychologically的话,把前面的in删掉就好了。

第10句,改为Omar tried to persuade his son to study hard, but yet worked.或者Omar tried to persuade his son to study hard, but still doesn't work.

1. The Titanic sank because it hit an enormous iceberg.
2. The astronaut works in outplace with very low gravity.
3. Steve has to structure his program about the new building more carefull