UC知道一篇很简单的英文诗歌鉴赏~高分
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A Spring Greeting
“Come,” said the sunshine to the grass one day. “Come out of the soil and we will play.
Put on your dresses of shining green.
For winter is gone and the days grow warm and clean.”
这是我同学写的一首诗，要求从意象，亮点，弱点，节奏和押韵方面进行鉴赏，用英文鉴赏哦~~
“Come,” said the sunshine to the grass one day. “Come out of the soil and we will play.
Put on your dresses of shining green.
For winter is gone and the days grow warm and clean.”
这是我同学写的一首诗，要求从意象，亮点，弱点，节奏和押韵方面进行鉴赏，用英文鉴赏哦~~
1. 这首诗两行已换韵，前两行押的是“ay”即day和play，后两行的green和clean则是“n”韵。
节奏：“Come,” said the sunshine to the grass one day是十个音节，而“Come out of the soil and we will play是九个音节。不过把第一句的to只读成t节律也就有了。
如果后一句如果改为For winter's gone and
the days grow warm 'd clean.”所有行就都变成九个音节了，读起来节奏更强。