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XXX,XXX,XXX:
Hello,thank you for your four years of my care and attention.Now,I have lived in Suzhou.Welcome to my house to play.I live in Suzhou Industrial Park Su'an village room XX XXX.
You will leave Suzhou at 29th of July. I hope that you will live better in new environment ,work smoothly,have good health.
Welcome to Suzhou in China.Welcome to my home.
XXX
帮忙把正确的发下,谢谢大家了,,好的有追加,,
Hello,thank you for your four years of my care and attention.Now,I have lived in Suzhou.Welcome to my house to play.I live in Suzhou Industrial Park Su'an village room XX XXX.
You will leave Suzhou at 29th of July. I hope that you will live better in new environment ,work smoothly,have good health.
Welcome to Suzhou in China.Welcome to my home.
XXX
帮忙把正确的发下,谢谢大家了,,好的有追加,,
Hello!
Thank you for the past four years of my care and concern, I have been team in Suzhou, you are welcome to play my home address in the village of Suzhou Industrial Park 20th Su'an Conference Room No. 30.
Suzhou, you will leave in July 29. I hope you better in the new living environment, the work to proceed smoothly, with good health.
Welcome to China's Suzhou, also welcome you to my home!
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记得好的话加分哦！