有无语病？

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Because I may be a beggar and you maybe the queen
I know I maybe on a downer am still ready to dream
Now it s 3 o clock time it takes for you to talk

So if you re lonely why d you say your not lonely
Oh your a silly girl...

I'm happy to hear that lovely song, But fell sad soon. Baby. I lost you
it's lyric.

有一些语病，我稍微帮你修改下

Because I may be a beggar and you may be the queen

I know I maybe feel down and I am still ready to dream

Now, it's 3'o clock,it takes time for you to talk

So if you are lonely, why'd you say you are not,

Oh you are a silly girl...

I'm happy to hear that lovely song,but feel bad soon. Baby, I lost you

maybe on a downer?
other than that, it got a nice beat to it.

有，感觉
”Because I may be a beggar and you maybe the queen “

有点毛病！可能没有，感觉而已！

典型的Chenglish