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We took school bus to forest park at 8;00am And while I was standing in front of the park I felt angry and suprised quickly
because there was many rubbishes hear and there and no one of visitors want to pick them np. After ten minutes,Iwent into the park,
Park,I was surprised again.Many visitors and children fed animals and climbed trees and no one of them felt ifs danger to do
that By the nay there are mary sign in the park that tell people not to climb trees. fead animals and throw rubbishes but
nobody takes notice of that.
After the trip to forest park ,I think all of us have duty to pick up ribbishes and as more trees as possible.And it will
be good for environment to put up some sign and we also need to take more ataintion on that sign.

We took school bus to forest park at 8;00am And while I was standing in front of the park I felt angry and suprised quickly
because there was many rubbishes hear and there and no one of visitors want to pick them np. After ten minutes,Iwent into the park.
Park,I was surprised again.Many visitors and children fed animals and climbed trees and no one of them felt ifs danger to do
that By the nay there are mary sign in the park that tell people not to climb trees. fead animals and throw rubbishes but nobody takes notice of that.
After the trip to forest park ,I think all of us have duty to pick up ribbishes and as more trees as possible.And it will
be good for environment to put up some sign and we also need to take more ataintion on that sign.