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Hi

I read the add about your apartment for rent.may I come to look at it,If I like it.
I'll signing of contract for six months and
1'll pay all in the time.

Thank you very much.

然后是你的电话号码。日期

Mr./Mrs/Miss后加人名：
How do you do?
This is ...（你的名字）.I saw your advertisement on the internet.I want to take a look at the house.If it is suitable,I will rent it for half a year,and pay a full payments in one time.

Thank you.
...(你的名字）

Hello,

I saw your ad. on the internet and want to take a look at the house. Is it ok if I just wanna rent for half of the year first and make a full payment upfront?

Thanks a lot!

your name here