英语作文 假设上星期你的家人去长城旅游，谈谈你去之前，到之后及回家的感受 70个单词左右

你肯定上初二，我记得我上初二的时候写过。那我就再给你写边吧。
Last week,my father,mother and visited the Great(你打错了，是GREAT） the Wall.we met at the bus stop early in the morning. When we were on the bus, we saw a lot of new buildings and new shops.Beijing was taller than before, I thought.
It took us about two hours to get to the Great Wall. When the Great Wall appeared in front of us, we couldn' , t help thinking how wonderful it is! I wondered how the people in the past built it without modem machines. It is said you can see it from the space.I was proud of it.
After coming home I made up my mind to study harder than before. When I grow up, I will work hard to make our country more beautiful and stronger.
记得给我加分呀，看我给你写的多好，是吧，以后有问题再找哥哥