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Under these circumstances,Iraqis take advantage of irrigation to cultivate their land. With 33% of the Iraqis working on it ,76% of the total land area is used for agriculature.Its agriculatural products are such things as wheat rice cotton and temperate fruits.Cotton and wheat are the major export products.

under these circumstances, Iraqis takes advantage of irrigation to cultivate their land. 76% of the total land area is used for agriculature wiht 33% of the Iraqis working on it. The main agriculatural products include wheat, rice,cotton and seasonal fruits. In which, cotton and wheat are the major products for export.

So Iraqis take the advantage of irrigation in which 33% of the Iraqis participate ,76% of the land is used for agriculature. The agriculatural products include wheat ,rice ,cotton and temperate fruits.Cotton and wheat are the major export products.

Under these circumstances, Iraqis has taken advantages of irrigation to cultivate their land.The Iraqis are working on 33% of the land, the other 76% of land are used for agriculature. The agriculatural products are things such as wheat, rice, cotton and temperate fruits. The major export products are cotton and wheat.

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