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我英语不算差，试一下。可能有一些语法错误。

Deat Wang Yong,
Long time no see.How are you?This summer holiday I went to Beijing with my parents.I felt happy.Let me tell you something about us.
In Beijing we visited Great Wall.It's so great that I took some photos .We visited not only Great Wall but also Summer Palace,they're very beautiful.Then we went to somewhere to eat something delicious and special.After that we did some shopping.I bought some postcads and toys.I will send them to you,if you like.
See you soon. I hope you are well
loves,
Zhang Ming

Dear Wang Yong ,

How are you ? i am in Beijing now with my parents,it is so cold here so that i did not dare to go outside in the early moring , but the food is so nice and decilious , include the Beijing Roast Duck and so on . You can see the morden building everywhere and the alley in Beijing . i thing the alley is the coolest, it is so traditional and historic .by the word ,i like Beijing