UC知道2009全国一英语小短文，求打分
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am out and going shopping when you see the message.
As you know,my father`s birthday is coming.I love he very much.So I want to buy something to him as a present. I think he will be very happy when he see the present.I will return those books that you borrowed to the labrary.
xxxx called you and left a message that the meeting at the 咖啡屋 was put out and she had told it to xxxx.you had better call her soon.
I will come back soon,please don`t worry about me.
xxxxx代表人命 我记不得了 咖啡屋题中给的有 我也忘了
As you know,my father`s birthday is coming.I love he very much.So I want to buy something to him as a present. I think he will be very happy when he see the present.I will return those books that you borrowed to the labrary.
xxxx called you and left a message that the meeting at the 咖啡屋 was put out and she had told it to xxxx.you had better call her soon.
I will come back soon,please don`t worry about me.
xxxxx代表人命 我记不得了 咖啡屋题中给的有 我也忘了
首先我不知道总分多少~~~但是我可以告诉你哪里错了~~~
（I）am out and going shopping when you see the message.
As you know,my father`s birthday is coming.I love he（him，动词后面用宾格） very much.So I want to buy something to（for，buy..for固定搭配） him as a present. I think he will be very happy when he see the present.I will return those books that you borrowed to（from从图书馆借的介词用from） the labrary（yesterday，这里一定要加个时间词表示过去，因为前面用的是will，即现在时，后面要用过去的话一定要加时间词）.
xxxx called you and left a message that the meeting at the (cafe) was put out（off，put off表推迟，put out是扑灭）and she had told it to xxxx.you had better call her soon.
I will come back soon,please don`t worry about me.
可能还有些没改出来的~~~希望能帮到你