高考英语作文评改

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以下是我的高考英语作文，请有经验的老师帮忙改一下。谢谢
Mr Wilson,
I'd like to tell you that I'll be out for a while.Needing to buy some goods such as a pen and a cap,I have to go to the nearest supermarker for shopping.In addition,I'll return the book that you borrowed a few days ago to its owner.
Moreover,Tracy phoned just now and left a message.He said that you don't need to go to the Bolton Coffee for the meet and Susan was told so.He also wanted your early reply.
That's all.I'll come back soon.Please don't worry about me.
LiHua.
如有错误，请指教。谢谢。
书面表达题目：
假如你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mr Wilson不在家，你准备外出，请给Mr Wilson写一留言条，内容包括：
1.外出购物
2.替房东还书
3.来电内容 1）咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消
2）此事已告知Susan
2）尽快回电

我中午叫我妈给你改 我妈是大学老师 I'd like to tell you that I'll be out for a while.INeed to buy some goods such as a pen and a cap.I have to go to the nearest supermarker for shopping.In addition,I'll return the book to its owner that you borrowed a few days ago.
Moreover,Tracy phoned just now and left a message for you.He said that you didn't need to go to the Bolton Coffee for the meetand he also told susan this.He is eager for your early reply.
That's all.I'll come back soon.Please don'tworry about me.
有的地方意思表达不清，时态个别有错误。

8th, June, 2009
Mr. Wilson,
I'll be out for a while with the need of buying some goods such as a pen, a cap and so on, and I will go to the nearest supermarker for shopping. In addition, I'll return the book that you borrowed a few days ago to its owner.
By the way, Tracy phoned just now and left a message. She said that you didn't need to go to the Bolton Coffee for the meeting because Susa